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Re: The Road to Home
I like this. it ends sort of suddenly, and it is just a little bit repetitive. I liked it though. Keep up the good work! Jamie
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Don't Let Us Go
This was extremely good! It was a little short, but I loved it! XD Keep writing. Jamie
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Shepherdess's True Love
I really like this. It was sweet and innocent! I like the story it tells. isnzt that what all girls want? :p Lol. anyways, I really liked it. I could ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Miss me?
I love this! It's amazing! I love the feeling and emotion. It seemed a bit repetitive, but I really like it! It's amazing! Keep up the good writing. I do ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Footsteps of a broken stranger
I really like the message behind this, and though I love the way it flows, it seems too repetitive. I think you need more verses. what's going on?! All you ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: These Chords Are Boss
This was...interesting. I liked the flow. It was a bit odd though. that's just my opinion. XD Jamie
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Tiffany Ariel - Part One
I actually really liked it. A few comma errors, mispelled words, and one sentence where it didn't sound right. It was a bit clich
May 7, 2008 -
Re: stages of breaking
I liked it, but it didn't seem like a song to me. But I loved the meaning behind the words. I loved this. it was really good. Write more! XD ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Just a dream
I love this song! It's really sweeta nd wonderful! I love the meaning behind it. I like how it flows. it was well written. I really like it. Can't wait ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Rain
I like it. a lot. But I think you need more verses and less chorus. it seems very repetitive. But that's just my opinion. I love the song though! It's ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Shadows On the Ceiling
I really like it! A lot. It's sweet and touching and sad. I like that it's a bit longer and the repeated chorus. I didn't really see anything wrong with ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Glass Walls
This seemed really choppy to me. I loved the idea behind it, but I couldn't get into the song. it was really short. the ideas and verses didn't flow. Just ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: One soul to go down
Um...besides ethics, this seemed more like a poem to me than a song. I felt the rythem...but like a poem. Idk. It was good well written, but I couldn't get ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Your True Name
I love it Teddy. Except for the first word. *coughs and raises an eyebrow* What happened to my sweet innocent Teddy? I'm just joking. I liked it. Keep up the ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Fall In Love... Just Not Apart
I love this! So smooth and good! XD I really like it! Keep writing! Can't wait to read more.
May 5, 2008